Summary Skills: Conciseness and Error Correction
English
GCSE
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A worksheet focusing on conciseness within summary skills, featuring error correction and analysis exercises suitable for GCSE students.
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Summary Skills: Conciseness and Error Correction
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The Atmosphere of Misty Dawn
As the first light of dawn stretched faintly across the horizon, the landscape was enveloped in a thick, churning mist that seemed almost alive, swirling and curling with an ethereal grace. The silent woods stood like silent sentinels, their branches heavy with dew, while the distant hills were cloaked in an indigo hue, blending seamlessly into the overcast sky. The air was crisp and cool, carrying a subtle scent of damp earth and fallen leaves. Occasionally, a distant birdcall pierced the quiet, sharply contrasting with the pervasive stillness, reminding the observer of life stirring beneath the muted canopy. This scene, both haunting and serene, evoked a sense of timeless solitude that enveloped all who ventured into its mysterious embrace.
1.
Identify and correct any redundant phrases in the passage to make it more concise.
[4 marks]2.
What stylistic device is used in describing the mist as 'swirling and curling with an ethereal grace'?
[2 marks]3.
Explain how the description of the 'distant birdcall' contributes to creating atmosphere in the scene.
[4 marks]4.
Rewrite the following sentence more concisely without losing its meaning: 'The landscape was enveloped in a thick, churning mist that seemed almost alive.'
[2 marks]5.
Identify the main stylistic purpose of the phrase 'cloaked in an indigo hue, blending seamlessly into the overcast sky.'
[2 marks]6.
Choose the best revision to improve conciseness:
'a scene that is both haunting and serene, it evokes a sense of timeless solitude.'
Aa) The scene is haunting and serene, evoking timeless solitude.
Bb) The scene is haunting, serene, and evokes timeless solitude.
Cc) It evokes a sense of timeless solitude in a haunting and serene scene.
Dd) The scene, haunting and serene, invokes timeless solitude.
7.
Identify a stylistic device used in 'The silent woods stood like silent sentinels.'
[2 marks]8.
Suggest a way to edit the paragraph to enhance clarity and conciseness, focusing on the opening sentence.
[4 marks]9.
What is the overall tone conveyed by this scene?
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