Travel Writing - Descriptive Language Error Correction

English
Grade 6
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~16 mins
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A worksheet focused on error correction within travel writing excerpts, emphasizing the use of descriptive language for Grade 6 students.

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Travel Writing - Descriptive Language Error Correction

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Grade Grade 6
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Error Correction in Travel Writing

Last summer, I visited the breathtaking mountain range, where the mountains stood tall and mighty, touching the clouds. The air was crisp and fresh, filling my lungs with invigorating scent. I wandered through lush, green forests, listening to the melodies of singing birds and rustling leaves. As I reached the summit, I was overwhelmed by the scenic view, a sprawling landscape of valleys and shimmering lakes. It was a truly magnificent experience, one I will cherish forever.
1.
Identify and correct any grammatical errors in the passage.
2.
Rewrite the sentence: 'The mountains stood tall and mighty, touching the clouds' to enhance descriptive imagery.
3.
Find a word or phrase in the passage that could be replaced with a more vivid or precise descriptor and suggest a correction.
4.
Identify the literary technique used in the phrase 'touching the clouds' and explain its effect.
5.
Correct the following sentence to improve its descriptive quality: 'The air was crisp and fresh, filling my lungs with invigorating scent.'
6.
Identify and correct any issues with sentence variety or structure in the paragraph.
7.
Suggest an alternative descriptive phrase for 'melodies of singing birds'.
8.
Explain how the descriptive language in this passage creates atmosphere. Use examples from the text.

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Created
1/1/2026
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1/1/2026
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