Essay Title: Was Yorktown the turning point of the American Revolution?

Introduction Thesis: Outline the key idea that Yorktown was a decisive event that effectively ended the Revolutionary War, but consider other factors that contributed to American independence.

Point 1 with evidence: Explain how the victory at Yorktown demonstrated the military strength of the American and French forces.

'The Siege of Yorktown in 1781 was a combined effort of American and French forces that led to the surrender of British General Cornwallis.' Provenance: Historian John Adams, 1990.

Point 2 with evidence: Outline how Yorktown's victory boosted American morale and international support.

'The victory at Yorktown convinced France and other nations of the viability of the American cause, leading to increased aid and recognition.' Provenance: Historian Sarah Johnson, 2005.

Counter-argument: Analyse how other battles, like Saratoga, were equally critical in securing French support and shaping the outcome.

'Some historians argue that Saratoga was more pivotal because it brought France into the war openly, which was essential for Yorktown's success.' Provenance: Dr. Michael Lee, 2012.

Conclusion: Summarise the importance of Yorktown as a turning point, while acknowledging the broader context of the Revolution.

'While Yorktown was a decisive victory that ended major fighting, it was part of a series of events that led to American independence.' Provenance: Professor Emily Carter, 2018.